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This is quite intriguing and gave me vertigo as i was in the position of the builders up high! I didn't realise it was going to say coca cola till the end, so that was clever. I think the thing that is lacking from the video as it stands is the sense that you might be critiquing globalisation. Is there something you can add for the exhibition that will give us this perspective, for as it stands, I'd read it as coca cola is great- almost like a clever ad for it. Is there something which could counter this that could go alongside?
I'm glad the Coca Cola sign wasn't obvious till the end. If i did this again, i would try to get on a multiplayer server and have one view of it being built at a distance with two people building the logo. As for the exhibition add on, I could write a piece to go along side explaining the concept.
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